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And so... their Journey Begins! by Lionel23 And so... their Journey Begins! by Lionel23
Writing Fanfic Season 2, Episode X (TBD) - And so... their journey begins! A commission art illustration done by :iconjackjacko-eponymous:~JackJacko-Eponymous.


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"I can't believe we're going on an adventure, just like Twilight!" Applebloom said happily, skipping merrily ahead of the group as they climbed the twisting mountain paths towards Machu Alpacchu.

"I'm sure that this time, we'll definitely get our cutiemarks!" chimed in Scootaloo, though a big huff from behind cause her to tilt her head backwards at the source.

Ever since leaving Haydeaux (and with what happened to the Damsel), their company had been joined by a certain changeling queen.

"Urgh... move it... already!" Sweetie Bell groaned as she shoved her hooves into Chrysalis flank to budge her forward.

Even though they were all adults, Chrysalis was bigger than any normal pony. And despite her cheese-holed legs, her display of reluctant resistance was giving Sweetie Bell a hard time in making her keep up with the group.

"Annoying little foals..." she muttered.

"Well, these 'annoying' little foals are going to prove your innocence! You should at least be grateful for that," Scootaloo said defiantly.

"I didn't ask for your... 'help'," Chrysalis retorted bitterly.

"And if we didn't offer our help, just where would you and your Changeling Kingdom be now? Writhing in agony because you can't get any love and you're too weak to take it from anypony anymore? That was why you were making that deal with the Damsel, wasn't it? Tell her something to save Equestria, and in exchange get enough sustenance to get you and your changelings back on their hooves?" Sweetie Bell grunted and gave Chrysalis a sudden shove forward, nearly throwing the queen off-balance.

"Watch it, you little ingrate!" Chrysalis hissed and bared her signature fangs.

"Girls!" Applebloom interjected, skipping back with purpose in her step as she stood between Sweetie Bell and the Changeling Queen, "Now Lady Amarethea said we oughtn't be fighting. We gots to work together if we're going to get up there and save Equestria. Now who's with me?"

The other Crusaders raised their hooves and let out a hearty cheer.

"Here, here!" the three of them said in unison.

"Argh... this is going to be a long, long day..." Chrysalis lamented sardonically.

Unbeknownst to them, they were being watched from a nearby cliff. They were not alone in these mountains.
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Even more teasers! This one is a bit out of order, as JackJackoEponymous had to take some time for this one. This is actually the 1st 'real scene' after the dungeon scene with the Damsel on the floor. That illustration is what starts this journey and this is their first location that they are all going to check out to save the Damsel in Distress!

Note for those who may say 'Well, the CMC are really big compared to Chrysalis!', the CMC in this feature story of mind have been turned into adults via magical means, and being they had blank flanks in the first place sets them a spot above the Mane Six in that they don't have specific talents that they are limited to during this journey, which as a writer gives me more options to explore other things with them. The sky's the limit! At least that is what a certain Rainbow-colored pony told me!
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Huganis Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015
Suddenly they heard a loud groan. "CAAAAAAAAAARL!"
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Yuegi Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
excuse my ignorance but who is the name of the first part of your fic?
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ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2014
How's the fanfiction's writing going? Is it up to read on your fimfiction pge?
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Lionel23 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014
I'm actually resuming this week.  Was busy with my contract job and it just ended.  Wrapping some stuff up together but I should be able to get back to pumping out stories soon. Hopefully XD
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ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2014
They oughtn't be fighting? Puch Cheese Legs' fangs in, and teach her gratefulness.
This over-grown brat doesn't know what she owes to them. >:-|
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Wolfieamble Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
LLAMAS!
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khajiitpony Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
baaaaaaa....
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elusiveCONQUEROR Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student Digital Artist
:iconhappyderpplz: THOSE LLAMAS ARE INCREDIBLE!!!!
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NODOGAN Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
damn, where can i read the whole fic? 0.0
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:iconlionel23:
Lionel23 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013
Still writing it, I have a family emergency this week so it's on temporary hold till I return!
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bonnybanshey Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013   Artist
I LOVE IT WE NEED ALL ANIMALS USED FOR TRANSPORT AND ARE HORSE LIKE like camels
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andaverde Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013
so when will the stories be out? i really REALLY want to read it :D
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:iconlionel23:
Lionel23 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
Working on it, been a lot going on in my life.  I think I'll post an update after I return from Bronycon!
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andaverde Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014
oh i know the feeling perfectly well and i mean PERFECTLY well!
dont rush it just post it when its ready
better to be late and clean than to be rushed and sloppy
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sootaloo Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013
YAY!!
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MrSmartusername Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013
i have a few questions of curiosity

1. Can i get a link to your fimfiction, if you have one.
2. What is the name of the fanfic season 1?
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Lionel23 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013
It's in my gallery (the fanfic for 'season 1') while I'll get you the FiMFiction link, note me to remind me as I have a plane to catch today!
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mr-tiaa Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013   Digital Artist
aah the south-americans <333

i rly loved to see a pic with these haha~~ <33
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ceraperduta Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013
Tenga cuidado, porque llamas son muy peligrosos! Si usted ve uno, grita: ¡Cuidado, hay llamas!
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Terrortheslayer Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013
someone link me this story XD
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Crystal-Eclair Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i am very interested in reading this fic, it sounds interesting and this pic is just funny
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yemto Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hmm... I'm a bit afraid of this
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templar127 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
YAY Chryssie!
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Alarmed-Llama Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Llamas!!!!!
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iamli3 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
or are those alpacas? as i don't remember the difference....
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Lionel23 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
Hmmm, I can't remember the difference either, but I think I specifically chose llamas for them.
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IcyPheonix Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Student General Artist
Going by this piece [link] I'd go with Llamas.
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iamli3 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
my little lamas , fighting is magic , hehe.....
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Anime-Adam Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
I like. in Season 4 they might show some lama's and the girls might be teens :3
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DeadCobra Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
Wonderful
I like Crysalis
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kittizak Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconimfabulousplz:
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katban Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
niice
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Sire-Sword Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hehehe, oh god. That is to funny.
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Chrismilesprower Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
LOL Chrysalis. This is very nice.
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theWolfdragon21 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
LOL this is so cool i like how there making her come but she just won't move XD
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Lionel23 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
Has to do with the other pics in the series.  Pretty much Chrysalis is blamed for taking out a princess ruler of a neighboring country and no one but the CMC believes she's innocent.  So while she is a villain, the CMC insist on her coming along so they can clear her name!
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theWolfdragon21 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
i see
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